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Came The Angels by ~among-the-dead:iconamong-the-dead:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional




Came the angels of tainted perfection
To line our hearts with ammunition
Adorned with twisted dreams of peace
To quell the fire of rapt ambition

Came the angels of newborn damnation
Fresh from the womb of brutal demise
Appeased with misfortune and vengeful souls
To gnaw our skin and gauge our eyes

And still, and still, the fires raged,
As victims fell to pre-dug graves.
Exiled creatures fresh from hell
Wished our shattered bodies well

And still, the roses failed to bloom
Crown with thorns, my blood consumed
Ebony blood runs cold as ice
Let loose with heartfelt sacrifice…
©2004-2009 ~among-the-dead
:iconamong-the-dead:

Author's Comments

thanks to Solitude-within for looking this over and convincing me to submit. hopefully you'll all like it! ..i've had a bad case of writers block for a few days, and this just came..i don't know where from or anything..i hope you like...
love always
Rose
xx

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:iconkaeyana:
~kaeyana Mar 27, 2004, 2:33:19 PM
You do well after writer's block. Nice one. ^^

--
"El hobo livo en el streeto."

~ReturnToNimrod

~Solid-Caine-Stock

~SexyBitchClub
:iconcatski:
~Catski Mar 27, 2004, 2:34:11 PM
I LOVE this... it flows so beautifully and the words are so... wow :)

+FAV for sure.
:iconamong-the-dead:
~among-the-dead Mar 27, 2004, 2:34:51 PM
wow! thank you so much! i wasn't sure whether to submit or not...thank you so much!
:hug:
:iconamong-the-dead:
~among-the-dead Mar 27, 2004, 2:35:40 PM
thank you so much!
i was hesitating whether to submit or not...and you've made it worthwhile.
thank you!
:hug:
:iconkaeyana:
~kaeyana Mar 27, 2004, 2:37:36 PM
Of course it's worthwhile! Even if you hate it, post it. Other people :heart: ing it may just change your mind. :hug:

--
"El hobo livo en el streeto."

~ReturnToNimrod

~Solid-Caine-Stock

~SexyBitchClub
:iconkaeyana:
~kaeyana Mar 27, 2004, 2:39:12 PM
You're what? <.<;

--
"El hobo livo en el streeto."

~ReturnToNimrod

~Solid-Caine-Stock

~SexyBitchClub
:iconamong-the-dead:
~among-the-dead Mar 27, 2004, 2:40:11 PM
awwww well i'm :heart: ing you at the moment for saying so!
thank you thank you thank you!

:hug:
:iconamong-the-dead:
~among-the-dead Mar 27, 2004, 2:40:55 PM
hehe sorry. silly computer. or my incompetence.
probably the latter. lol
:iconkaeyana:
~kaeyana Mar 27, 2004, 2:41:40 PM
Yee. You're welcome. ^^ :hug:

--
"El hobo livo en el streeto."

~ReturnToNimrod

~Solid-Caine-Stock

~SexyBitchClub
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