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Came the angels of tainted perfection
To line our hearts with ammunition
Adorned with twisted dreams of peace
To quell the fire of rapt ambition

Came the angels of newborn damnation
Fresh from the womb of brutal demise
Appeased with misfortune and vengeful souls
To gnaw our skin and gauge our eyes

And still, and still, the fires raged,
As victims fell to pre-dug graves.
Exiled creatures fresh from hell
Wished our shattered bodies well

And still, the roses failed to bloom
Crown with thorns, my blood consumed
Ebony blood runs cold as ice
Let loose with heartfelt sacrifice…
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thanks to Solitude-within for looking this over and convincing me to submit. hopefully you'll all like it! ..i've had a bad case of writers block for a few days, and this just came..i don't know where from or anything..i hope you like...
love always
Rose
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Mood: Scared ~Xfluffyx50 Feb 2, 2011   Writer
Chicken
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:icondontpretendtoknow:
next time you get your writer's block, all you have to do is think of the paradox in which you find yourself. you are anxious that you won't be able to write, so instead of worrying that, try not to write. try to go as long as humanly possible before you have to grab a pen and paper and just start scrawling once the urge hits again. it sounds insane but it's an actual psychological principle. once your brain gets on the track of 'ok so NOT writing is not so bad' then you will be almost instantly re-inspired.
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~starlight-silence Jun 23, 2009  Student Writer
its such a simple structure, but can be so powerful. your word choice was very good too =]
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~Jack-Lilac458 Apr 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
wow
i normally don't read poems on DA but this was breathlessly beautiful
amazing writer's skills you have! absolute fave on that!
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:iconrozenmaidenangel:
Yeah for insanity!!




I apologize for oh whatever
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:iconrozenmaidenangel:
them they turn into puppy's.



i apologize for my pure,uncontrolled insanity but that shit can happen when demons kidnapp you take away your T.V.
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:iconrozenmaidenangel:
That poem is so F**king cool!!!!!! Oh i wish i could write like that! Oh, BTW i killed the last of the goblins. Turns out if you dump soapy dish water on
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:icondontpretendtoknow:
this was in my faves and i just went back and read it. holy. wow. beautiful.
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:iconsublimetransgression:
I absolutely love this poem. It has the sort of twisted beauty that I admire.
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